Peer review #2

Elizabeth is doing a travel magazine for Miami. She's making it about unique places in Miami that everyone can find an interest in. She showed us a template for her magazine. She's doing something simple that matches the Miami vibe but at the same time there is a lot going on. The target audience for her magazine is young people mostly. We gave her our opinions on which set ups we like better for the text and picture placements. 

Mariana is doing a film opening about a girl growing up in a low class family. Her mom gets remarried but the man isn't a good person. He abuses his wife and after the mother passes away he abused the daughter as well. The daughter meets a guy who she falls in love with. However after the her father sees her and her boyfriend together he kills him because he is just a horrible person. He cleans up everything so there is no evidence of the killing. The daughter is so sad and angry she decides to kill her father but she doesn't care to hide it in that moment. So when the police come and she is trying to explain what happened, they don't care because they see that she just killed someone. She then gets sentenced to death row. This is where the film opening is going to take place. It's going to be the day of her execution and a reporter comes into to get the daughter's side of the story. The reporter asks "what happened" and there will then be flash backs of all the events leading up to this. The daughter then says "everything" and that's when the title card pops up. We suggested for the dialogue that she leaves a phone close to the person talking so the phone will pick up a clearer recording of the dialogue that she can then just sync together in the editing process 

Daniela is doing a film opening about a girl running away with her boyfriend. The opening scene is the girl packing her clothes to run away. There is going to be flash backs during the film opening on the girl and her boyfriend talking about running away together. They are going to present the girl is all nice and girly at first but when she goes to run away she is going to change her clothes to black and we suggested maybe adding colored hair extensions for an edgier look.

Sarah is doing a food magazine on healthy foods. She is going to have a page that talks about easy ways to cook healthy meals fast. Her double paged spread is going to contain how breakfast is really important and it will include three cooking recipes. We all thought her ideas were good 

Isabelle is doing a baking magazine. Since time was running short she didn't have much time to explain everything to us. She told us she is going to have her friend help her with recipes and how she is going to have a celebrity chef kind of section. She will also be adding pictures of really pretty cakes and what not.