peer review

Last class we did a peer review and i was in a group with Sarah, Isabelle, and Ben.Sarah is doing a healthy food magazine and we offered that she should do a question and answers section on her two page spread. Isabelle is doing a baking magazine and she talked to use about how she loves to bake and that's what she does when she's bored so doing a magazine on that topic would be most interesting to her. We told her that she could buy a fancy cake at Publix or any grocery store and take some nice photos of them so that when she adds the photos to her magazine, the cakes look like they were professionally made. Ben is doing a film opening about kids who go into a forest and get lost or that something happens to them. I told him that his story line was pretty vague and it should include more of a variety of scenes instead of just kids going into the forest. We also suggested that there should be some reason the kids go into the forest in the first place since when he was explaining the story line, there seemed to be no motive at all as to why the kids were hanging out in the forest. I then explained my story line for my film opening. I told them about how we're going to do it about a boxer and have a whole fight scene and that we're then going to have our boxer get hit so hard he gets hospitalized. And that the film opening will set the story line of the whole movie which will be about the boxer trying to recover fast enough for his next fight. No one really had any complaints about it or any suggestions. I think they all thought it was a pretty good idea and that made me feel good about the direction we're choosing to go with in our film opening.